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The beat don't take you in the song....

The beat doesn't bring you in the flow. If you want to improve, try to increase your beats.

For the rest it sounds good :)

~Adjeye-3

darcdebo responds:

Yep.

Really nice track,

I don't really know anything about HM but I do like it :P.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks! :P

Sounds good....

But It doesn't really have a good hook. It needs to have a hook to keep your intrest for the rest of the song...

For the rest, it DOES sound great. Find a good rapper or singer (because T-Pellah can't rap).

~Adjeye-3

LTGuitarist responds:

Hey! Thanks for that, and yeah I pretty much agree- I was hoping to have some kind of vocal hook to play with but it never really happened...

sounds nice!

You made it really catchy. The origonal isn't really that catchy.

1:30 more synths could have been added for a more catchy song!

Goodwork,
~Adjeye-3

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

haha ill try ^^ bot my cpu is already off the charts -.-

Told you you're better at techno..

Than at dubstep :).. Well done!

~Adjeye-3

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Well you said my one song was more techno then dubstep=p
But now I know:]
Thank you^^

Sorry,

But I need to be honest, the 1 down is totally right. This is more techno that it is dubstep. think 60%=techno the other 40 dubstep.

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thanks for the review.

I don't think I'll change the genre though, dub gets more hits:/ tbh.

Nice..

This is the kind of dubstep I like :P.

Goodjob, keep it up!

~Adjeye-3

jpbear responds:

kuwl

Really nice track.....

Tho I have to say that I am not listening to house often. But I don't have to know house to say this is really nice to dance on.

I even heard a familliar sound at 0:15.. its out of vengeance essential club sounds III :P.

Maybe you could have made the the background change more. But thats my oppinion, and thats maybe because of this being house.. But Its sounds proffesional to me and it has a clean clear sound, quallity is awsome..

The little guitar notes are really awsome, they keep you catched by the song.

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thanks man!

Needs more bass....

Good breakbeat but it needs more bass for a D&B song. I think I would have rated this a 10 if it was trance..

DJThunderGod responds:

yea i kinda just gave up haha but i might come back and finish it. hard song to remix properly.

Certainly this is your best song.

This song is complete, but I want to give you some hints for upcoming songs.

-Big break-down
-In real comercial tracks, they build up their beat in 1:30 and then the melody.
-Change the melody a bit more (but still let it fit!)
-use more intresting synths.

These aren't critisms but are things you can use in the next songs. Please expiriment with more different synths...

~Adjeye-3

DJThunderGod responds:

yeah, ill try to work on those for my next tracks. Im glad you like it :)

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Utrecht University

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