Adjeye's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burn (dubstep)]

Haha nice,

you got a chance against the weekly top 5 bastards :P

Plze review my newest song too,
~Adjeye-3

[Luminate - Instrumental vers.]

Wow, butifull man...

This song is really butifull..... Don't know if this is wroten by you, if it is, you're a awsome componist O.O...

Plze review my newest song too,
~Adjeye-3

[Mechanical Destruction]

Hey,

awsome song man, plz check my song out too!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/413479 (get the space out)

~Adjeye-3

[A Journey to Elsewhere]

Certainly this is your best song.

This song is complete, but I want to give you some hints for upcoming songs.

-Big break-down
-In real comercial tracks, they build up their beat in 1:30 and then the melody.
-Change the melody a bit more (but still let it fit!)
-use more intresting synths.

These aren't critisms but are things you can use in the next songs. Please expiriment with more different synths...

~Adjeye-3

DJThunderGod responds:

yeah, ill try to work on those for my next tracks. Im glad you like it :)

[Forsaken Neon]

Better you don't make homework....

And make more of this shit :)

[Alone with the Dark(1)]

I like the idea but...

some notes didn't fit... like starting on 1.22. They aren't chords so they don't sound well. I think you also should add a high pad. The main melody gets boring after 1.30 min. you should change it. And if I were you I would take a other instrument (entering at 1.36) the call&respond doesn't sound well.

Please don't get mad because I just gave a honest review...
Can you please give me a review too? http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/407710
Get the space out otherwise it won't load,
~Adjeye-3

Omega-Ravager responds:

Heck no I won't get mad from an honest review, that's why I'm here. To learn, thanks for the advice!

I'll give your song a listen and change out some stuff in this one, thanks for taking the time to critique!

Omega

[Smile or Frown]

I am Adjeye-3

I want to comment on your reaction and I've looked to more songs of yours.

First of all, you probably it didn't took much time to make it..
try to not get lazy in you're songs, every detail in music is important.
When I first listened to it I thought, lets just vote a 2 because its probably a kind of newby. But I am one of the few who actually listened the whole song.
I thought you where a newby because the guitar didn't sounded human, the instrument is right from basic FL studio without a change in it. Probably all the instruments you used. You need to get something like Nexus or tone2 Gladiator.
If you have one of them, your sound will improve.

And one thing what I notesed that you didn't listened to peoples comments. Don't know if you tried. You have to, If I give someone a advice, And he don't do anything with it, I wont give him advice again..

For the beat, I have to say the ritm is good but the samples are really bad.. Try to get some vengeance packs (I use Vengeance essential club sounds3).

If you do everything I told you you probably get much good comments.

Please review my last song too! (Its called I need to be lonely)
~Adjeye-3

12spike22 responds:

I really will look through alot of the comments again and try to work them into a future song i guess. and i am kinda newbie cause i still fail with alot of songs. im definately gonna check out ur songs and hope that helps me alot

[Skybase]

Sad...

it needed a bit more mastering, but yeah if you did (which you didn't could do), you've got a 10 from me :P.

Maybe a idea for your next song is, to mix this kind of melody with the beat of the song you posted before this one. I think it will turn in something epix!!

geef ook ff een comment op mijn nieuwe! hij heet need to be lonely.

~Adjeye-3

XTEEL responds:

Oh hey, ja misch morgen, keb het nogal druk =S

[-:HaloTopic:- Pendulum Swing]

I like it...

but you maybe can add a pad or something on some places :P in my opinion,
weird but cool! (9/10, 5/5)

PLz review me back on my latest song plz! (I need to be lonely)
~Adjeye-3

Halotopic responds:

It´s all about personal preferences =)

Thank you!

[Strange World.]

Hmmm....

I thought, wtf is this for scary song in the beginning, but the guitar that cam in, hold that feeling, And I love that feeling XD!

-Nice written.
-good sound effects.
-Its really awsome

Go on like this and you will be bigg.
~Adjeye-3

Sherlock-Bones00 responds:

Thanks.. I'm glad someone finally reviewed it